My poetry

Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:07 pm Post subject: My poetry

Please no bad comments.

As i sleep that night i felt a tremble, thougt it was a ghost
but i was to young to remeber. It was clouded but yet bright that night the light made the cloud shapes threw my window. I thought because of the cloud it would harm me but i was brave and never feared i woke up the next day and m window was open maybe the ghost had come and left it open, i knew for a fact it was a crazy time but your mind plays tricks on you so dont forget my last line [Very Happy]

Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:21 pm Post subject: ..

I liked it. Heres a thing, im making up as i go. Idea from you.

I found thy cloud met me through,
in one end and out the other, and a window that
was let open from all the things that had escaped and passed
me by. Poor smo, thy ghost, for this is made me scared,
i screeked, and this ghost whillowed away into the dark crisp knight,
leaving the window open for new things to come into play.

[Made that upon the spot. [Very Happy]

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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 2:37 pm Post subject:

Nice man i liked it it flowed and i belive thats the main thing about poetry [Very Happy]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 8:36 pm Post subject:

Expressing your feelings is the main thing about poetry.